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Della asks for help. Her family hears.

In this arrangement, Kinloop tells Della’s family. Cedar Hollow can see that it happened.

Della replies HELP. Kinloop tells her daughter, June, straight away, and texts her emergency contacts. June answers YES, and the reminders stop. Cedar Hollow can see it on Della’s page. Her family is who Kinloop tells.

Seen by Cedar Hollow. Heard by her family.

A single white card on cool grey, headed with Della Fitzgerald-Moss’s name and her county. Four plain sentences run down it beside small ink dots joined by a hand-drawn line: Della replied HELP; June, her daughter, was told straight away; her emergency contacts were texted at the same time; June replied YES and the reminders stopped. Set apart beneath a thin line, one sentence says Cedar Hollow can see this on Della’s page.

Della Fitzgerald-MossBrightwaterAskedDella replied HELP.ToldJune, her daughter, straight away.TextedHer emergency contacts, at the same time.AnsweredJune replied YES. The reminders stopped.On Della’s page, Cedar Hollow can see that it happened.

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